Your Update Link: The Ghost in the Girl
Good morning! As promised, I am posting the revised short story, The Ghost in the Girl. I wrote it as the first Sunday Rewrite short story in three parts. Parts 1 & 2 are largely the same — but they’ve been edited and refined–even expanded in some areas. Part 3 was heavily rewritten. I added a lot to the Liason scene in the park and rewrite the ending of the story entirely. Please take a read and let me know how you like it!
I’ll see you guys tomorrow for Flash Fiction!
Comments
I read the revised story on fanfiction. I enjoyed it so much. It was a great story.